jotted thoughts
can i say dumb, dumb, dumb?
the story was a good teenage (YA) story. was turning into a good mystery, but why was it a mystery? what happened to the Vanessa’s sister could very well have been the truth. the sister wasn’t afraid of anything, did almost the same exact thing the night before, so why wouldn’t she have done it this one particular time…the time that starts the mystery?
but in a way, the story was okay until 3/4 of the way through it, then it turned into mush. and i don’t mean lovey, dovey mush. i mean, it turned my brain to mush…
where were the details about Vanessa feeling different than the rest of her family? previous details would have helped the story play out better.
the story takes place by the water and it’s called “Siren”, so you know what it’s going to include…but it never pans out right. it’s missing a few too many moments and details, and includes some that don’t make sense or play any part of the story. come on, a paranormal or urban fantasy of mermaids, it can happen. now i just need to find the book that makes it happen, because this one was not it.
i feel like i wasted 2 weeks of my life waiting for the book to come out so i could read it. amazon should not have included this book on the same page as other books i have liked.
